Elmore Leonard, 1956
1. Never open a book with weather.
2. Avoid prologues.
3. Never use a verb other than "said" to carry dialogue.
4. Never use an adverb to modify the verb "said”…he admonished gravely.
5. Keep your exclamation points under control. You are allowed no more than
two or three per 100,000 words of prose.
6. Never use the words "suddenly" or "all hell broke loose."
7. Use regional dialect, patois, sparingly.
8. Avoid detailed descriptions of characters.
9. Don't go into great detail describing places and things.
10. Try to leave out the part that readers tend to skip.
My most important rule is one that sums up the 10.
If it sounds like writing, I rewrite it.
Elmore John Leonard, Jr. (1925 – 2013) was a novelist, short story writer, and screenwriter.
His earliest novels, published in the 1950s, were Westerns, but he went on to specialize in
crime fiction and suspense thrillers, many of which have been adapted into motion pictures.